Rabu, 16 September 2009

Kalo Ga Minat, Skip Aja...

Buat pembaca budiman, maap melenceng dikid, ada tugas writing dari mam CC, saia kalo pengen dapet nilai harus posting first draft di blog... I`m sorry for the inconvenience.

My First Mobile Phone To Be Broken
The first time i broke a mobile phone is a very humiliating experience, can you imagine that you broke your cellphone because you braking hard your motorcycle in front of your friends??? How humiliating is that??? The accident happened 3 years ago when i was in 2nd grade of senior high school. At that time my parents bought me a very rare mobile phone in Indonesia, and i was very proud of it, a brand new Siemens C65 Rescue Edition. To buy that German-Made mobile phone i must waiting for several months because the stock is very rare. And do you know??? Just two days after i got that, i broke that in front of my friends. It was Monday noon at 13.00, the bell rang and it`s time to come home. I wanted to come home as fast as possible, swiftly i took out my motorcycle from parking area and accelerated my motorcycle as fast as possible, instantly i became a racer. I speed up my motorcycle until 70 km/h and still pushed up my motorcyle but i didn`t dare enough to consult the speedometer. Reaching U turn i deaccelerated my motorcycle, suddenly there were some friends of mine crossed the road carelessly. Lucky me, i`m not panic, i tried to brake my motorcycle. I pushed hard my brake systems, but unfortunately it`s too hard and i almost lost my balance. Thanks to my God i could recovered myself and there was no accident happened. But something`s goes wrong, where`s my mobile phone? I tried to find it in my pocket but i couldn`t found it. I`m not surrender yet, then i searched it backward, gotcha i found it, but it`s already wrecked. I dropped it when i braked hard my motorcycle, i didn`t considered that i didn`t put it properly inside my pocket, so it could be slipped anytime. My friends laughed at me at that time, i`m so embarassed. My two-days old rare Siemens broken into pieces just only because of my stupidity. But i could learn from that accident, you must take care of everything you had, even in the most critical condition. I hope this accident never happen again, just enough once in my lifetime.

3 komentar:

  1. No problem with the paragraph organization, only one thing that bothers me, you have used the proper tense, but still you have to check your "to-infinitive" form..

    Write the revision on your notebook and see ya on next friday!

    _Miss CC_

    BalasHapus
  2. dek wen?karangan mu cuma segini??gag kurang panjang??

    BalasHapus
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